Deep Desires
To have
the life I dream of,
I ask to my Lord above.
To have
everything, anything,
To have
someone,anyone.
To have
love, someone to think of.
To have
happiness, and fill emptiness.
To have
successes and many blesses.
To have
deep desires are fires
They won't burn out,
until you start to doubt.
This is what life is all about.
These are my fires,
my deep desires.
These are my fires,
my deep desires.
Sincerely,
Aishah
Aishah
#OctPoWriMo Day 12
Prompt: Write about desire in whatever form you chose.
Words: Desire, Lust, Wanting, Obsession,
Fascination, Possess, Love, Enraptured
Excellent write! What you want, what you desire...I really hope it all comes to you. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Rod! I really appreciate it! With time, it will- I believe so :)
DeleteSincerely,
Aishah
Interesting contrast between the big dreams and the humbleness of asking the Lord above.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I believe HE gives us what we deserve.
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Aishah
I hope you are able to achieve what you desire. Above all, always value your own worth!
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Thanks Adam!! That is true, thank you for that!
DeleteSincerely,
Aishah
I love the rhthym and thought in this!
ReplyDeletethank you Fifi! I liked the outcome of this poem :)
DeleteSincerely,
Aishah
Thank you Lizzi. I believe God has a plan for us and HE knows best for us, and gives us what we deserve when the time is right.
ReplyDeleteI hope so too, haha but the poem isn't just about finding a person, but that's part of it- not the entirety though. Its also about finding my own success and happiness.
Thank you once again!
Sincerely,
Aishah
May all your dreams come true Aishah. Beautiful poem. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Payal, I really appreciate it :)
DeleteSincerely,
Aishah
I like this. I can see your passion and your fire. Hope you have a stellar week! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Cindy! Hope you have a wonderful too!
DeleteSincerely,
Aishah
A fine poem, very well written. Best wishes Aishah ...
ReplyDeletethank you Georgia!
DeleteMay you find the path that leads to your dreams.
ReplyDeleteAww, thanks Beth! Thank you, I appreciate it:)
DeleteSincerely,
Aishah
Im with Beth... I hope these dreams and prayers come true!
ReplyDeleteThank you Zoe! That really means a lot to me :)
DeleteSincerely,
Aishah